[2] Grief

The Book of Fear

 

 

Elora had been a wound that couldn’t scar. A tear that couldn’t fall.

She had been a hand desperately holding onto a rope at the bottom of the pit.

She had been loneliness, sometimes emptiness. Most of the time, she was both. And all she had been able to do was to watch herself rot a little more every day.

Looking at her was like staring at his own crooked reflection. A mirror broken beyond repair.

“I love you.” Sehun said knowing the only reply he would ever get was silence.

Then, finally, they took the coffin away.

 

 

 

 

 

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Amekel #1
Chapter 6: all of these are brilliant, but my favorite so far is grief. i dont know why... probably because it wasn't very predictable until you got to what sehun said at the end.. i just thought it was really clever
lisinica #2
Chapter 3: I loved this one. Grief is an emotion you can't easily describe, yet you've done a great job.
Jxmin_Park #3
I like how short, and mysterious the stories are it pick out the most heartfelt parts( I'm going to enjoy reading over the summer
Amekel #4
Chapter 2: kind of want this to be a full story... kind of trying to connect this to your last drabble...


even though i know its not the same thing haha
Good job Alice! Your words are poetic!
Amekel #5
Chapter 1: Super neat! There are so many questions in my head after reading this.
nonetheless, beautifully written!
lisinica #6
Chapter 1: Wow. I am impressed. The writing style is on the edge of perfection - almost like it was rewritten a thousand times to get to this.
Also, the fact it only describes emotions and not characters nor scenarios make it awesome because it can fit whatever the reader imagines. It's a really good drabble. I hope you can update daily, but if not, you can always update when comfortable :) keep going.
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