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"What is this feeling? And how, I wonder, will this story end?” Tyler slowly opened her eyes and realized that she’s lying on a bed by a window that was fogged with the breath of a life gone by. Who knew, that day Tyler would fall in love with a girl for the first time and to be exact, that girl is her own bestfriend. There’s just a word that can describe the feeling. “Crazy”. Yeah, it’s crazy.

This is how it all started. The new chapter of Tyler’s life. That morning Tyler had just woken up, the first traces of dawn leaking through the curtains in her room. She got herself ready to start her new day. She put on her long sleeved shirt and jeans since she found out it was more comfortable than the other clothes that a girl usually wear. After she finished changing, she grabbed her phone and put it in her pocket and left the room.