Err, have to agree with your sister. It was crappy when he told he's gay, lol I was like expecting that. . . There'd be like a bomb, or sth that he'll make it obvious to the people around. . .etc. I'm on c3 now. Hmm, well descriptions are really a must? It goes quite fast too? ^.^
You really got a nice plot, though I've read somekind of before. Just that, pace is like skipping to the other one? Also, the conversation. . .uhm try to be descriptive about those? Not just quote-after-quote. Hmm, typos. . .there are some. I think 2? Hehe! Last is, it is nice. . .really, just that put more. I mean, be more descriptive? LAST! Okey. I am NOT a pro. I'm just babbling here. >_<
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