Not gonna lie I've always hated characters who just couldn't confess and is a big coward but in reality I'm no different to them xD I really like how the majority of people can relate to this, frustrating, yes very but if I was on Mina's place I would've done the same. It was realistic which is why I liked it despite the tragic ending. But overall, thank you for writing this! Also btw~~~ I love your writing style
Chapter 1: I already read this days ago. But I want to you know somehow let you know how I was tragically hurt by the ending.
It was oh-so frustrating to see that Mina didn't take any chance in pursuing what she thinks is right. I don't blame her tbh, cause we all have instances where we don't want to interfere with other's relations especially if it isn't yours; think of it like butting in unreasonably. I was also disappointed at Momo for not realizing how much that girl was hurting her; also about how she was not abusive bc she was not using violence or any sht.
Not ranting. Totally not ranting. I was just really impressed on how you wrote everything that makes it somehow real.
'Cause believe me, this kind of scenario "majorly" happens especially if it's only a one-sided love.
I literally wanted to scream out of defeat bc I was maybe-kinda-possibly hoping that Mina would do something and confess to Momo and you know that fluff sht. I'm a die hard fluff-yearning person and I was crushed by this fic.
Okay, okay enough about typing. Thank you for this wonderful fic, really. I am now intrigue in what fic you will do next ;). Just so you know, I don't hate your fic; I was just really a human that always thought every fic has a happy ending. ((I'm a sadist who am I kidding :'D)
Chapter 1: Fluffsaur my . This shot is cancelled. I can't believe i read it till the end, 11/10 do not recommend.
This was so realistically tragic, it was that good. I felt just as upset as Mina, and upset towards her but she can't help it, everyone loves Momo. Besides the one-sided angst feels, we also got to see a just as realistic abusive relationship that doesn't involve physical abuse. This real. Kinda made me think Momo also seems to have some minor inferiority issues comsidering she wasnt exactly in a happy relationship after the first 3 months but idk.
Hatechu, im a fan now. Look forward to your future works involving twice :).
Chapter 1: I find your name kinda misleading... "Fluffsaur"? I see no fluff in this fic. No fluff whatsoever. Only pain and angst and pining and suffering and oh my god it's so well written though? Lol thanks for writing (even though it hurts to read).
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