Wings

Description

Big Hit Academy was one of the most prestigious academies all around the world and surely the most prestigious one in Asia. When Park Yumi recieved the acceptance letter she was more than happy.

But would she be able to survive in a world of Pures as a Non-Pure? She didn't even know if her own brother would be still as accepting as he used to be, after all, he was Pure.
 

Characters

Kim Namjoon - Lightning - Year 3 - BTS Leader

Min Yoongi - Aura - Year 4 - BTS

Jung Hoseok - Fire - Year 3 - BTS

Jeon Jungkook - Ice - Year 1 - BTS

Kim Seokjin - Water - Year 4

Park Jimin - Earth - Year 2

Park Yumi - Bonds - Year 1

Kim Taehyung - ??? - Year 2 (Transfer from Rowling Academy)

Foreword

Have fun!

- Yeonra

choi-yeonra
I finished rewriting and I'll try to upload the next chapter as soon as possible.

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Moonpixie #1
Chapter 1: Will you continue this story author-nim?? I'm really looking forward to see what happens <3 <3
Mayeneys
#2
Chapter 1: Any updates?
Moonpixie #3
Chapter 1: Omg i'm dying for an update!!!!
Can't wt :)
Styng22 #4
I love this kind of fantasy and supernatural genre :)
One_useless_user #5
Chapter 1: Ooh I really like how you've changed it up!
kulitlang08 #6
Chapter 1: seems like you changed it...this was not the original thing you wrote before...and this time yumi is jimin's younger sister (his dongsaeng) instead of min yoongi's...

the other characters where not mentioned except for jimin and namjoon...and in here, jimin is a pure and his sister is a non-pure where in the previous one you made both yumi and yoongi are non-pure's...

anyway...i am looking forward for the next update...
janelle15 #7
Chapter 1: Wahh update please!! I like the plot but please don't turn them into real jerks just a little bit maybe? Anyway fighting authornim!! :)
One_useless_user #8
Chapter 1: I really like this; I've always adored this theme of elemental powers so your story's right up my ally. Already you've created such intrigue, given BTS isn't in their completed group and Tae's element is still up in the air, but nothing is serious yet, so i can get to know the characters without fear of their future- as far as I'm concerned the ideal first chapter. I also want to say I enjoy reading your writing style, though- and this is purely nit-picking- I am on occasion confused when multiple people speak within the span of one paragraph. I would like to stress that this is just my inner English student and it really doesn't matter, and is simply the only piece of constructive criticism I have to offer.
Can't wait to read more, and good luck with this story
~R
kulitlang08 #9
Chapter 1: this is interesting...so i am assuming that taetae will be part of BTS even though he is a transfer student...

i am excited to know what taetae's power is...

i am also assuming that seokjin (water) and yoongi (darkness) will be part of BTS...

but so far...the BTS members are jungkook (fire), jimin (fire), hoseok (air) and namjoon (earth)...

i also notice that hoseok is younger than namjoon in this story...and are jimin and jungkook brothers? if kookie is on year 1 how did he immediately become a member of BTS??? this is the first time he will be entering the academy right??? and people already knew that he is part of BTS...so i am assuming that the academy has seen his ability and namjoon, hoseok and jimin also knows of kookie's ability and that is why he is already a member even though this is the first year he will be officially entering the academy...

looking forward for the next update...