Chapter 1: Even though it was really short, I loved it!! The plot AND the way you portrayed the characters was amazing. I wish it was longer!
Again, I'm looking forward to reading your other works!
Chapter 1: woww.. this is a fresh and original.. i haven't read a fic ike this before
this is so awesome and sci-fi <3
i hope there is any other chapters or sequel for this fic xD
Chapter 1: This concept is so cool! I really enjoyed it ^^ I'm curious about how onho's relationship would go from here... please consider writing a sequel!
Chapter 1: So it's completed, what a fresh idea you have!
It must be really great if there would be a sequel..
Just 2 or 3 chapters more must be enough *cough* XD
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