Chapter 3: I went to realize that the story of jikook was the story of bleach in the second chapter and you defined what you felt when reading the last chapter, in fact I could not get to the third page because I found joking, do not take ill for me the ichigo Could end up alone that would be better than with the orihime, had no development between them and honestly when she appeared she wanted to break my computer because she was extremely annoying. I took into consideration that they are from different worlds but if you stop to think it would not be impossible because that's exactly what the father of the ichigo did for his mother, he stopped being a shinigami to stay with the masaki, urahara was another that stayed On earth, so it is not a valid point for that end. I feel like I've been expressing more of what I felt about the manga than with her fanfic forgive me for it, the end of it was sad but it was good too, she wholeheartedly in the end the Jinyoung had not overcome all he suffered so much in childhood if His father had not died he could have been happy, you did a great job, congratulations. I do not use English often so if something went wrong I apologize.
Chapter 3: I was all for this until you put that sad as hell ending. Was the story Naruto? Because it was all I could think about when they talked about the comic
Chapter 3: I have no idea what was the story you talking about here, but I felt like I'm no stranger to the feeling of the story (the jikook one), like.... maybe I've read something similiar before? I don't know...
But I really love /your/ story. There are some things that I couldn't understand, but you showed me that even though the thing doesn't make sense doesn't mean it can't be beautiful.
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