Kai in the Mirror

Description

But one day, Jongin made a miraculous discovery: In the old wardrobe of his mother lived a boy.

A boy with wild black hair, wide brown eyes and pale skin, the same milky colour as his own.

He decided to call him Kai.

Foreword

A oneshot disguised as four chapters.

 

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yashaletti
#1
Chapter 4: This was amazing! Really well written and terrifyingly interesting!
toniluv
#2
This is a masterpiece, well written page turner.

The opening about the twins, one unintentionally killing his brother inside their mothers womb. How devastated the mother went through, losing not only a baby but a piece of themselves, she fell deep into baby blues without any support from the husband who threw himself into his work. Husband not only neglected the surviving child but the wife too. Baby blues won the battle taken the mothers life. Now Jongin's completely alone in the big house. My question who feeds him while the father was at work? Sister, nanny, grandma, or father came by prepping food and leaving them for his son?

Oww neglect takes a toll. Leaves the kid vulnerable to what lurks within the shadows, night terrors, his mental status desperate for contact. He developed another personality. Missing piece of his twin brother he does not or somewhat aware of. Sometimes mirrors and within the shadows does exists of different demintion. Shadow people, seek after the vulnerable, the mirrors a place of lost souls. If you/person look at your reflection and see you turned and the reflection does not. Yep time spray rose water on the mirror and put a sheet cover it.

Poor kid. Which one was Jongin, the kid trapt in the mirror or the live one?
Corals
#3
Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thank you for giving us this masterpiece!
heartlesssoul_88
#4
this was really well-written! however, who was screaming and scratching at the door? what were the shadows? or am i just too dumb to understand that haha
Philosophies
#5
Chapter 4: Well, that was really terrifying and absolutely incredible. It was so interesting to read what looking in a mirror looks like to someone that doesn't understand mirrors.
mikinikino #6
Chapter 4: Oh wow, this is just so sad. Poor neglected little kid who practically killed himself because of his mental illness while he was already sick and his father wasn't even caring!! Ah, I feel so depressed now.
Thanks for this story<3
januarywinteress
#7
Oh my god this is really good! I loved the creepy atmosphere this fic gave off. Had me on he edge of my seat. I feel so bad for both Jongin and Kai tho...poor babies :'(
heclgehog
#8
Chapter 4: Oh my GOD. Technically Kai killed him you could say since the mirror falling and shattering is what caused Jongin to be injured like omg so symbolic. But like, where was Jongins family thooo lol. Was it like winter break and Jongin was just byside himself while everyone else worked? That's what seems most logical to me. Damn son, this story was great tho, and I like that it was broken into chapters rather than being a one shot. So glad I decided to look at the newly updated fics and click on this~
heclgehog
#9
Chapter 3: Ahhh poor baby :(
heclgehog
#10
Chapter 2: Aww of course Chen would be a Cheshire cat lol. But I love when other members are characters but like not in the traditional sense. Jongin is so lonely poor baby. I wonder why he isn't allowed to go outside and play w the neighborhood kids ;_;