His Last Pledge

Description

The last pledge of the dying will not go unheard.

Foreword

“Don’t. Move.” He hissed, pressing the blade harder against my throat. I could feel the sharp sting where the blade pierced my skin, hot blood drizzling down my neck in a thin stream of warm crimson against the chill-paled skin on my neck. An involuntary hiss of pain escaped from between my lips.

The fire appeared to dim for a second or two before it rose back up in a blaze of glory. They say eyes are the gates to the soul, the soul before me is burning itself alive.

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TA0ZIS #1
Chapter 9: i love it!!
KirinJidai
#2
Chapter 9: Oh my gosh, I only just noticed that we are reading each other's stories xD Thank you for recommending my story that means so much to me m(o_o)m
That aside, I like how each chapter is a kind of "independent" episode, like, the chapters aren't really blending into each other, you just leave out a day or a few hours as you please and that's something I haven't read before, I really enjoy this o3o (I can't describe it, but it's good, I like your writing xD)
bookwonderer24 #3
Chapter 4: Chapter 6: I like this story very much. It's interesting and I see both my otp in this story.
KirinJidai
#4
Chapter 6: Awww, this is so cute, we get to know a bit about Minhyuk's and Hyunwoo's relationship <3 Well done, I can't write fluff either but it's cute nonetheless, believe me, I like it! :3
Good work, I'm so looking forward to what will happen with Kiho, fighting <3
KirinJidai
#5
Chapter 4: Since nobody seems to think it necessary to comment: I do.
I really really like this story idea, it's something rather original and I can already feel the drama waiting just around the corner, so, I'm looking forward to more chapters! o3o I also hope to get to know the other members a little better soon, but take your time, anything is fine since we're only at chapter 4 :D