Beautiful

Description

It was a beautiful morning, but why?

Foreword

This is my first attempt to write about real people. Also, as you might note, english is not my first lenguage, so sorry for the multiples mistakes. Any help improving it is more than welcome.

Hope you like it. Thanks for reading!

 

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Ahmei23 #1
Chapter 1: Beauty storyline ?
SunDaeDreamz
#2
Chapter 1: This is beautiful. Good job
LoneShiba #3
Chapter 1: HEY SWEETIE! I SUBSCRIBED!
this is your first attempt? I can't believe it ;p
It's a great start and I'm so glad that you found courage to write and post this todae :3
Huggles from me!!!

The start is great and I can't wait to read further chapters ♡
So it's the start for their new journey of relationship? I'm curious about what's gonna happen next, hope it won't be too angsty...kkkk~~

I found some typos but that's understandable :) do you want me to tell you?

One more, I guess its Seunghyun and not Seunghyung? ^-^ or it's some kind of pet name? ^-^

Love you ♡♡♡♡

Fighting my sissy ~><
juneSakura
#4
Chapter 1: a thumb up to great start (y)
sayasayangtodae #5
Chapter 1: i m curious before this what did you write about?
Orrobus #6
Err looking forward author-nim ^^