Do You Remember Me...?

Description

It's my frist time writing a fanfic so please don't bash me if it isn't good!!!

POV story:)

Kara and Kyuhyun were bestfriends and neighbors when they were little... They were seperated when Kyuhyun had to move to Seoul.

They meet again 10 years later after Kyuhyun got into an accident... Would their friendship continue? Or would new love blossom?

Foreword

This is my first ever fanfic... I often imagine myself and my bias, but I never really write those stories down:3 Please don't bash me if I got my facts inaccurate!!

P.S. The character 'Kara' is my bestfriend... She is the coolest person I know, besides me:D We're both writing this fanfic together, but she doesn't have an acc here, so we'll just have to do with her twitter acc!!

Author: @_BaekHoe

Co-Author: @Emi_Kara

Comments

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AahFeeKiee #1 Jan 24, 2012 19:35:18

The suspense as to the identity of the therapist came a little too short, so we kinda saw it coming. Try mentioning Kara even earlier. And then maybe Kyu could have temporary blurred vision so he doesn't know who his therapist was. Oh and instead of mentioning America again, try saying "I know of a good therapist from the States." It should make it harder to predict. :) hope this helps.

ssweetdreamer101 #2 Dec 28, 2011 09:03:41

I really do love the story line so far! HWAITING :)

ChoKyu #3 Dec 28, 2011 05:53:14

just write this ff the way your comfortable with. ^w^<br />
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update soon~~

ChoKyu #4 Dec 27, 2011 19:27:34

update soon~ ^w^

ssweetdreamer101 #5 Dec 27, 2011 15:51:17

i love it so far but (you don't have to listen to my suggestion lol) but instead of making each event so choppy (like by adding characters suddenly and them leaving) add a little detail to make it flow a bit more if you do that then you add more length to each chapter and just watch a few grammar mistakes but other than that! LOVED IT <3

sushi3 #6 Dec 27, 2011 12:36:14

hello~~ your story is good! just take note of a few grammar mistakes here and there...(: update soon! ;D

ChoKyu #7 Dec 27, 2011 06:18:04

awww, poor kyu. >_< update soon

ssweetdreamer101 #8 Dec 26, 2011 21:31:00

oohhhh love triangle poor Kyu though he seems so upset! :'(

BlaaaJung #9 Dec 26, 2011 20:57:01

Oh ..,sorry that the new chapter came out like this!! I need to edit it!!

BlaaaJung #10 Dec 26, 2011 20:55:21

Waaa! People commented!! Kamsa for commenting!!! Yes I will treat yoy guys well!!! I'll try my best to be a good author and write more!!! Please give me some tips on how I can improve!!