First Love (Fic)

Author(s): Illicits | story link: here

Main characters: Baekhyun/Moon Myunghee (OC)

Rating: - | Genre: Romance, Fluff, School life, Angst

Author's official description:

"When Moon Myunghee accidentally witnesses the breakdown of the boy she hates most, the seemingly flawless Byun Baekhyun, she begins to question whether or not he is as perfect as he seems.

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My Review ► Good | ♥♥♥

A story I discovered recently and which is nice to read when you're bored or want to get your mind far awar~

+Good points:

Their relationship is nice even though it doesn't seem it is when you start reading. Love-hate relationships can be as bored and cliché at it sounds but it was actually nice here.

Nothing is boring. You will read it quickly and without getting bored. 

Sehun/Hana. It was kinda nice to have them though. I usually don't like side characters who are too much in the story, but it wasn't too much to be annoying.

-Bad points:

More descriptions. Something more psychologic as it would bring something more serious and have a deeper meaning. It can seem a bit plain as it is too focused on their love and relation. I would have like it better if there were more medical/psychologic parts in there.

More of everything. It would have been so great if Baekhyun wasn't the only one suffe