Chapter 5: I almost shed my tears while read this.. Nice story.. :)

I cried so hard reading this. you have such a talent... like seriously. i can't stop crying!

Wow, I disagree. This story was really really powerful. I absolutely lobed it. Thank you for sharing. That lesson will stay with me forever. Thank you

Awww I'm about to cry right now...ahh~ it's so sad D; *sighs* but it was a really good story :)

How can you say this is not a good story? I love the story and it's so sweet. You're still good at writing stories! Hwaiting!

I can't stop crying..This story is so sad..:'(<br />
you are very good..although i think the storyline is a little bit messed up but i can understand and imagined it perfectly...<br />
write more story..:)<br />
good job..^__^

This story actually has simple and a bit common idea, illness (I have read so may ficts where most of them use leukemia and brain cancer) and death, but you succesfully made it has different feelings and cover those things up by ur unique writing styles! Although it has a fast plot and the storyline is a bit predictable but the way you describe the situation and the character's feeling in a very detail and beautiful way is the one which made this short fict become special and more heartbreaking. I think this is one of the best skill authors ever had: turning an ordinary idea became a great one! XD good job unnie :33! I will wait for another short stories in the future!! ^^

-crying- <br />
pity yoseob ..<br />
why does she have to die ?!?! T.T<br />
anyway, great story .. =D<br />
keep writing !! xD

ah this story was really really wonderful <3<br />
thank you for writing it ~