I'll cross the line first

Description

park chanyeol is the epitome of everything baekhyun hates.

or at least he used to be

Foreword

this is kind of a prompt fill for anna @chanyeolsdeepvoice from a tag game. sry this is so late and that it doesn't exactly match your prompt but I said I'd write something so here you go sweetie hope it's something like you imagined ♡

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themoonknows
#1
Chapter 1: So I'm finally going to post a response to this! (I'm Anna aka chanyeolsdeepvoice @ tumblr) and omggg. You really hit the nail on the head with how you portrayed the characters. Baekhyun was just so lovely and Chanyeol was just what I imagined when I wrote that small promt. I love the detail about Baekhyun working in a tea shop since I'm addicted to tea. It makes the whole setting more cozy and comfortable.

"He had come not as Park Chanyeol the always put-together superstar, but as Park Chanyeol a regular teenage boy with his hair in disarray and shoulders slightly shaking from the November cold." THIS SENTENCE!! I can perfectly picture tall and lanky Chanyeol stepping in through the warm tea shop (cries).

I also think you did a really good job at portraying a stoned Chanyeol, like he was perfect so you should be really proud over this whole fic.

"Because out of all the people I've met, you were the only one who seemed to hate my fame as much as I did. As much as I do." DANG SON (sorry I'm getting too excited). But for real!! Hate my fame as much as I did! This is too perfect. I can't put my thoughts into words but honestly you really wrote the characters just as I want them.

And lastly the moment where he quirks his lips to smile but it's not a real smile! Exactly what I meant with my promt. I know this review probably tons but I'm so bad at describing my feeling. Just know that this means really much to me and I didn't even expect you to write something out of this, so I was really chocked when you sent me the link to this story. Sending you hundreds of hugs! ♡