Thank you Wonnie for saving the Evil Maknae.
lalalala.

Aww siwon came to rescue Kyu's life >333

Aaaaaaah my poor heart. It was breaking in the middle of your story but then Siwon came and uuuuuugh <33333333333333333333

*teary * omg. . *___* beautiful story . . .

I'll be serious... :p This is for you anyway~ This is an okay oneshot. You have a thing for using ellipsis(...). I know that using that can add drama effects, but it doesn't mean that you end each dialogue or sentence of a dialogue with that or with an exclamation point. Also the use of 'and'. It's actually not good to begin with a sentence with it. You actually used it quite a few times.<br />
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I'm actually curious as to how you can turn this as a chaptered story. :p

God, I literally cried for this, Good Job, *thumbs up <br />
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Write More !!<br />
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Wahah