Here's A Tip

Description

Jongin’s too shy to talk to the cute customer who comes into the coffee shop he works at everyday so Baekhyun comes up with a scheme to help him.

 

Foreword

 

Rating: PG

Side Pairings: very slight Baekhyun/Xiumin

Warnings: None

Word Count: 3,818

Originally written for the kaisooaufest No One Dies This Time

crossposted on ao3 (i'm blueheadband on livejournal)

coverart by the wonderful soopuff on twitter!! (check out the whole set it's very cute and it made me cry but it's a bit of a spoiler so i'll only link it and not post it)

 

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yutoppang #1
Chapter 1: I gotta admit, Baekhyun's idea was indeed genius, haha!! His comment at the ending was hilarious too!! I bet it surely got KaiSoo blushing really mad!
Thanks for sharing this! c:
mintchocchipyawn #2
Chapter 1: THIS WAS SO CUTEEEE!! And an amazing idea (*¯︶¯*)
adilah #3
Omg they are so cute. I hope you'll make a sequel of them dating (=´∀｀)人(´∀｀=)
Sunnycup_soo #4
Chapter 1: I said this already but I am literally Jongin and wflkvmvkd

First of all, I wanna hit Baekhyun, but I also want to love him for being such an annoyingly good best friend?

I cannot believe this is your first fic, honestly. It is so good, and so well written, and just the cutest thing ever.

Jongin sighs. “That one customer. The customer. You know the one with the glasses who’s always so serious and nerdy looking, but in a cute way that screams ‘I’ll file your taxes but I’ll also lay in the grass and stargaze with you’.” A dreamy look has replaced the desperation and Baekhyun chuckles at the quick change in Jongin’s demeanor.
“Oh, you mean Kyungsoo? Not exactly the vibe I get from him, but whatever you’re into, man.”

^Hardly into the story yet and I'm already laughing.

Can we talk about this tip concept though? Its so creative! And I love how well you've illustrated Jongin's pining, and Kyungsoo's shyness I'm just.

Also, about the jar that asked about who is more handsome: I would have screamed and probably quit my job bc Baekhyun is sneaky lil . (But would Ksoo pick Harry Potter or LOTR tho?)

I love the small moments that mention Minseok being done with Jongin and Baekhyun's lol. Great side character development. It is completely endearing across the board. Speaking of that, the hint of Baekxi is top notch.

“Yeah, he’s in the back lugging big, heavy boxes with his huge muscles that he got from being so handsome and strong.” Jongin rolls his eyes. Baekhyun is really laying it on thick.

OMFG why do I feel like this would actually happen I'm crying.

Jules this is so great, I want this to be the pilot of a tv series.

<3 <3 <3
TissueBB #5
You deserve so much more recognition! This is one of my favourite stories from the fest.

Looking forward to your future stories!!! I love fluffy!kaisoo
kyungiebunnie #6
Chapter 1: *SQUEALS*
PH MY GOD THIS IS THE CUTEST THING I HAVE READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE I LOVE THIS
Ecklipse #7
I just loooooove fanfiction!! This is gold! Every characters are so precious ^^
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