Dont't play with fire

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!One shot!

Jealousy isn't something unusual in a relationship, but what happens when you burn of jealousy and you can't seem to control your emotions? What will happen? How is this supposed to go out? Who will get hurt? You? Or the one you love the most?

 

 

 

Foreword

Another story about Hanbin and Bobby, this time things will not turn out as you think they will. Happy end? Will there be a 'Happy end?' Love isn't just about the beautiful sites of love.

Love hurts.

Love destroys

 

and

 

Love controls you...

 

Each. Part. Of. Your. Body.

….And when love stops controlling your heart but your brain the most fatal thing will occur. JEALOUSY 



WARNING: VIOLENCE!

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boy1a4 #1
Chapter 1: Pretty good but the ending seemed a bit odd to me. I mean, ending it off with a death? I feel like you didn't really know how to end the chapter (or couldn't decide how to) and chose to play with the character's mentality too far to commit such a scene.
I think it would have been better if you left with a more open-ending or with so much ambiguousness, where you didn't have to write that far. Or if you wanted a character death, it would have been better to create a build-up for it. Not something that just suddenly happens within too little paragraphs. Because the death didn't really make me feel anything compared to Hanbin's beating.
This is only my suggestion tho.

Also, the setting I believe should've been different. I don't really see Bobby going ballistic over such an accident. I mean, an argument during practice to the smoking scene (which I think you should've dulged on more) to being a sadistic a-hole...the change was too fast. It was more like a psychological problem rather than simple jealousy.

Love Hanbin's character. The OC girl too Minhae was cool. Yunhyuk was a bit uncharacterized? Jinhwan as leader? Said by YG? Don't see that happening.
kimbobbain #2
you make me cry over this story T_T
lishaaang #3
Chapter 1: I'M CRYING
lulukkaebhyun #4
Chapter 1: OOOHHHH MYYYYYY GOD !!!!
nicyeol #5
Chapter 1: I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT I LIKED MORE THIS ONE OR DARK SECRET UGHHHHHHHH I SWEAR I REALLY THINK YOURE A GENIUS
Mongji10 #6
Chapter 1: Wow.. It was wonderful but also so sad..
I love the way you write and describe the painfulness that Hanbin was feeling..
I was crying non stop while reading it, as I was feeling the sadness, pain, rage and jealousy that were potrayed..
Good job for writing this, and keep up the good work~
P.s. Now i need to reread "It doesn't matter" to convince myself that double b is happy together..
yayaluna #7
Chapter 1: NAANNNNNN IT DOES HURT ME BUT BEAUTIFULLY NAN DID U GET D IDEA FROM THE POEM?
panda_bunny #8
Chapter 1: Wow~ so good~
I love gore gender and this was beautiful. I could feel them, the sadness, the soreness the madness... love can make you crazy... my heart is beating so fast right now... Nan you have skills... i can't even make a proper paragraph, just random phrases hehehe
It wasn't a happy ending but it was a perfect ending.
runnie30 #9
I have been warned but still gonna read it:)
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