Puzzle

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"Just stop hesitating, okay? Just please take out my heart.. Like a dazzling ray of light.. Even the moonlight of the night, close your eyes...”  

Jungdah doesn't know why the same song has been in her mind since she first saw her Red.

Foreword

This is something I wrote for http://aboy-andhiscat.livejournal.com/. This is like the beginning of a universe I imagined. This is basically LuChen but I plan to add other oneshot stories about the other pairings once I have something written. 

It's my first time writing same-gender pairing so I don't know. ㅋㅋㅋ

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ratuuu #1
Chapter 5: This is a masterpiece. You have one hell great talent of writing. I'm swimming in the world that u create, feeling them deep inside my bones. I really love this story n I'll check ur other story too. Good job!
ratuuu #2
Chapter 5: This is a masterpiece. You have one hell great talent of writing. I'm swimming in the world that u create, feeling them deep inside my bones. I really love this story n I'll check ur other story too. Good job!
ephemeral24 2410 streak #3
Chapter 4: forgive me for only reading the KrisHo parts... but im such KH trash i don't really read other pairings unless they're side pairs to a KH story...

but the Krisho here, it's really sweet... in the first oneshot, where Yifan just knew how to calm Jun down and to comfort him... even ditching his own parents just to be by Jun's side asap... one would think to achieve this level in their relationship, they would've known each other for long already

so to know the story abt how the couple came to be and to think that it was more of a spur of the moment than anything, it's fascinating!

i understand that Yifan doesn't want to let go of his Fated already as he's searched all his life but damn!!! fortunately Jun was able to see the light of marrying each other instantly so he was aboard with the plan...

Minseok being the big brother tho!!! ofc all of them would be shocked! when Jun went to Japan, he had no boyfriend nor a fiance but when he came back he's already married! but im glad they accepted Yifan wholeheartedly... and omg i guess Yifan's parents has always wanted him to meet his fated so they instantly loved Jun :)

the only thing that hasn't changed for now is Jun's insecurity... how can he think he doesn't deserve Yifan? well they obviously deserve each other that's why they're Fated... i hope he learns to get rid of that, with Yifan by his side maybe he could help too! i have no worries as they have the whole future ahead of them, maybe one day, Jun will be able to get rid of it on his own

sweet krisho is sweet! lovely read :)
allybabe747 #4
Chapter 3: Loved this!! :D
snflwr0893 #5
oh my god.... just... oh my god!!!! this is so perfect I don't even have words to describe x.x (but I do wish the krisho chapter/bonus was longer) congratulations authornim! I loved!
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