Chapter 1: Aaaaaah I'm screaming! I'm SO WEAK for these two loving each other I just dbskxkhajglo! Can't. Handle. I liked how you conveyed their feelings I'm so !!!! <333

Chapter 1: So cuteeeee ☺️

Chapter 1: Aw that was so sweet!

Chapter 1: That...was the sweetest...way of confessing...I can't breathe （；＿；）that was so perfectly written. Everything was placed so well and it fits together so prettily and omf I'm claiming this as canon (⌒▽⌒) baekyeol probably kissed behind the scenes too. Pfft authornim, are u suree u don't work behind Exo's sets? U seem to make things so realistic ;)

Chapter 1: That was a really nice story! I love how much you focused on Chanyeols feelings and put effort into describing them as accurately as possible - which is really difficult because feelings are hard to put in words. But you did very well, I must say! Like, I could feel how conflicted he was. And the part where he traces the piercing with his fingers was definitely my favourite as well, it was so sensual! Thank you for sharing this with us! Nice story! Btw, I think your English is fine :)

Chapter 1: I was searching for a fic like this ever since 'Monster' came out and i finally found it!
This is beautiful, I don't think I can describe it differently.
Chanyeol's emotions, the kiss, everything was described so perfectly and the second one made me giggle like an idiot.
I love the part where Chanyeol traces the piercing with his fingers and thinks how Baekhyun warmed the metal with his breaths
it was so perfect ;w;

anyway, excuse me, it's 5am and I should definitely go to sleep. Thank you for writing this! :D