Chapter 1: This is so sad and cute at the same time ;;

Chapter 2: If sehun asking me " are u dead" i will definetly say YES and it him the one caused the death of me :'))))) this story is really my style, ssm = short,simple,meaningfull♡

Chapter 2: oh, gosh. I love this so much. the analogies, 'lie on my lawn', 'you're the sky' and even soojung's need to stargaze and count the stars, all held their own meaning and it delivered very well. and how'd you manage to write this with such impact in just 2 chapters? just wow. skilled, much? especially when the story deals with a pretty hard subject. hurt/comfort and death was portrayed quite well without too much angst, in fact, it was all quite subtle but very effective. the comedic moments in between wasn't too much either, it just fit so right with the overtone of the story despite the sad topic. so this really impressed me! gah, i enjoyed it so much. the characterisations was very good too, i like how their little quirks came out with the Oh family's weird words like sehun's 'chubswiches' (LOL I LOVE IT), even soojung found herself doing the same. that was so cute. oh, and ofc, how can we forget little jaehyun? his arrogant/innocent personality was funny, but also provided a fitting contrast to how the brothers dealt with the death.

god, i'm gunna ramble on forever so i'll stop. but yes, definitely enjoyed it so much. thank you for writing something so beautiful. i hope all's well with you and have a nice day xx

Chapter 2: okay wow i can’t believe it took me so long to find this?? but i’m really happy i did because THIS is the kind of writing i look up to when i’m trying to write something myself.

like i’m not too huge of a sestal shipper myself but i fell in love with the characters here. i love how even though they’re neighbors and they meet at the beginning of the story, they don’t actually MEET until later when sehun’s brother (who is super adorable!!) is at soojung’s house. i loved soojung in this; like it broke my heart in the second scene when she went into sooyeon’s room especially since i know how close they are irl. and sehun’s characterized so nicely too!! even though he initially doesn’t seem to be hurting, it turns out that he has much more in common with soojung than i thought and i love how you revealed that graudally throughout the story. it was so interesting to see the contrast between jaehun and sehun too and it makes sense that jaehun wouldn’t be as attached.

the dialogue you write is flawless as always and i’m so so jealous of the way you can write dialogue well in ALL situations. i honestly can’t believe that this was 10k words because it never dragged at all for me!! like the pacing was perfect and i always love how your characters don’t immediately get together like mingyu and sana in turning the sphere and kai and naeun in be here). soojung’s growth was fascinating to watch as well and it was really heart warming to see her eventually accept sooyeon’s death. and them lying on each other’s lawns!! i love how you can turn that into a meaningful thing haha. you write slice of life fics very well!!

i’m sorry if this comment doesn’t even make sense but just know that i’m in love with this and i really look up to your writing and i can’t believe it took me so long to find this ;-; i hope you never stop writing!! you're so talented <333

Chapter 2: This is deep. I love your story, i'll read your other fanfics..

Chapter 2: this made me tear up ;; I'll be glad if you'll have another sestal

Chapter 2: This is really beautiful.
I hope you keep writing more stories like this gem right here, I'll be sure to follow them.
and if you ever write more please let me know, i need more meaningful fic/stories like this. :)

doesnt really remember how I found this fanfic but I have it bookmarked on my browser so I decide to read it now. and omg, this is so good I can feel all my sestal nerves are burning with happiness fire. do tell me, how could I get a neighbor as cute and handsome and amazing and awesome as sehun? should I lie down on my lawn and pretend to be dead until someone gives his umbrella for me?
and their first date though.. it really is silly but somehow I find it weirdly romantic.
I love this fanfic. the way you describe every characters and moments and feelings they have are just terrific! please write more sestal...

Chapter 2: This is sooo nice. It's so cute I love Jaehun and Sehun and Soojung and eveyone hahaha.

Despite the granmar, I love the story and the writing is incredible! Very great characterization too! One of the best fanfics I've seen :)