Chapter 2: I love how Hakyeon just confesses to Jaehwan he's just fallen in love with someone who's half-human half-fish and he only tells him ''he's out of his league'' lmao. Anyways, this is really good! The way you write is really pretty and you describe things perfectly for me to picture them in my head. I wish VIXX stories got more recognition, I'm sure that if they did, yours would be really popular even though you've only published 2 chapters so far^^ I hope that Hakyeon is all well and alive lmao, I guess I'll figure it out soon... have a good day!
Chapter 2: Hakyeon's a bit dumb. Or then just occasionally delirious. And Taekwoon's not good with humans. And it seems like mermaids can't give oxygen under water more than once. And how the hell did Hakyeon breath in the air given by Taekwoon? I would have accidentally got sea water in my nose. Unless you actually meant that he breathed while their mouths were still together. Or then I'm just dumb and don't get it.
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