Crying and Begging

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World always looks brighter when we were younger, but everything changes when we become adult. The laugh and happiness that I shared with them was the best time that I won't forget. I want to stay like that forever.

I guess, it's just a foolish wish.

If only I try to care more. I can see their crying and begging clearly.

Because, that's my only regret.

Jimin... Jungkook... it's not too late, right?

 

Foreword

Author's note:

I know. I'm making too many new story. I even haven't update my other stories. But, believe me, I'm working for it right now. It's rare to see fanfic about BTS x Lee Hi.
That's why I create this story. This is an oneshot story. I hope I can finish this soon.
The story is mine.

 

and btw, I have co-author who is the beta reader of the story. Thank you so much chubbybaek :*

credit for the review by thunderingexo from ~BUBBLY G.S.~
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credit for the review by MEENO24315 from Mystic Multi-Shop

credit for the review by kpopdrive from ELYSIAN REVIEWS

Perfect soundtrack for this fanfic <3

Jungkook - Lost Stars

 

Lee Hi - Breath

 

Jin - I Love You

Jungkook - Purpose

Jungkook - Breath

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I'm putting two soundtrack for the fanfic in foreword. Please, have a listen [Crying and Begging]

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FrozenInside
#1
Chapter 2: So happy ending at the end, I like it. My side that lives angst preferred te other ending because it seemed as if Jungkook died at the end and it just felt kinda appropriate because the entertainment industry is not always nice and it was like showing how bad it messed up with someone just because of who they love. Either way this was a nice read. I felt like some part weren't necessary in the last chapter but I mean when you're at the end it seems like it's fine so nvm.
Thank you for writing! :)
FrozenInside
#2
Chapter 1: Well then. It really wasn't a love triangle. It was pretty clear who Hayi liked and who Jungkook liked too. Definitely not a bad thing tho. I liked how you made so Hayi wasn't a singer you know, like it was kinda of an alternative universe. Also you had a lot of different groups and you mentioned the other members of BTS. I felt a little bit bad for Sungkyung because I feel like Jungkook really did like her. Maybe not as much as Hayi but you know. That ending, I love it. I feel like it's a perfect ending. Haven't read the epilogue yet but imo that was the perfect way to end it. Also Hayi's pov was it a dream or something ?
FrozenInside
#3
I love Lee Hi and BTS so I'm excited to see how you'll write this. Not a big fan of love triangle so I'm however kinda apprehensive. But I'm curious if it'll be a closed love triangle like they all like each other or one in which two people only like one person.
kpopdrive
#4
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NoonaYoung
#5
Chapter 2: It'a new to have Lee Hayi paired with BTS. I've read a few Lee Hayi's fanfics and it's mostly with iKON and Dean. I mean yea, why didn't I think of this? But, well, you did it and it was great. Chapter one reminded me a promise I made with a friend 13 years ago (I was 10 at that time). We had a pinky promise that we should meet up again after seven years but we didn't. I've gone to another state following my parents and actually we didn't contact at all after that pinky promise. So now I still wonder where should I or should I really get in touch with him again, who knows he might have forgotten about me. (I'm sorry, it's like I'm going to tell my grandfather's story here -_-")
Back to the story, I'll say you managed to bring out the chemistry among the characters, very well. And that the situation you created for them too give us a picture of what is happening in the reality (I mean seriously, most dramas or scripts are written based on everyday's life, right?). Though it looks like we may have a cliffhanger but the epilogue is the best. It's really good.
So, two thumbs up for you Author-nim for all your efforts and hard work in order to give us this wonderful story. Thank you so much and FIGHTING!!!!
niangniang
#6
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CARMELLA291100
#7
This song really suits the story especially Lee hi~Breath. I really feel the feeling of the story after listening this. This is better when you listen to this song after you had read the story. Felt like a real drama i'm watching right now.
CARMELLA291100
#8
Chapter 2: It's really hard to stop reading this until the end. I thought i was gonna stop reading this for a while cause it was really long but i didn't. This story drag me in it. Good work, You are the best. I love this story so much.
CARMELLA291100
#9
Chapter 1: This hurt me. I feel like crying right now, my heart really ache. I can't stop thinking about it. You're one of the best writer just like Mitch Albom. I respect you a lot. Thank you so much for writing this story.
CARMELLA291100
#10
Cool, this is the first time i see story with music video. It's awesome.