Chapter 1: This is super great. Never imagined Hyukjae would do that to save Donghae. But that was super nice. And also how finally Doghae returned to help Hyukjae and all those sweet moments. Damn, my fluffy heart really loves it❤
Chapter 1: an enjoyable journey thus far, though I'm wishing there's more of this neat universe you created. thank you for writing this, I'll be sure to read the sequel next! ♡
Chapter 1: Ah and yeah i agree with my dear hyuk ah;) gosh twas amazing to read this oneshot and im inlove how you nailed and all this story,gosh my eunhae feels♥️♥️♥️✌
Chapter 1: This was truly an amazing read. You gave just enough details to keep your readers informed, which was great; your explanations were very good & understandable, too. And the way you switched up everything about vampire weaknesses, while sticking to the original myths was very creative and impressive. The only issue I had was their relationship & how it progressed: one minute Donghae is ignoring Hyukjae, then the next he is suddenly all over him. Also, I found the ending lacking. But even that wasn't really deterring, because I still really enjoyed this story. For instance, this is the longest comment I have ever written (seriously) - plus the fact that I don't comment often because I read from my phone & commenting can be a pain - proves it. >-<'
Chapter 1: So adorable !! I loved it :)
The theme is dark but has the cuteness of fluff to it~
I wanna ask for more chapters lol because I feel like they could get to know each other more :3
Plus I fell in love with the way you wrote both hyuk & hae in the this story <333
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