Something about the writing here just flowed so well..
Jinyoung's reactions were really realistic, and the text messages were really well placed ,, idK how to explain but like, it really worked well to show Jinyoung being distracted and concerned with more important things, but at the same time, half-paying attention to Gongchan. Which made the sort of wham line at the end even more meaningful?? I just, idk, it was just such a good little oneshot.. Even what you said in the author's note sounded so cool :p
Honestly, a continuation of this storyline would be so dope o_o
(no pressure, obviously :L)
Chapter 1: Wow! I think I just became a fan of yours. This was very short, but it didn't need to be any longer. I thought at first that Chansik was somehow mentally disabled, but then became the twist. It was first sweet and innocent, but ended up as something creepy. Loved it!
So, at first, I'm like "awwww Channie is so cute~" cuz I thought it was cute how he sparked up a conversation with Jinyoung, and then he goes onto fireflies.
But then he says that his mother and brother are dead because of him and that he was from an asylum and like "o.o okay"
It was a very interesting read, but any JinChan is good for me~
Chapter 1: Oh mai gosh--
I cannot express my love towards your fics (and creepy Chansik). Like, you're so good at writing creepy stuff (?), and I just really love it.
The only question going on in my head is how the heck does Chansik always manage to escape??
Anyway, I really liked this one shot!! It was short, but really nice. ♡
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