Mistake (Heartbreak Hotel)

Description

He watched her from afar just like she did. She thought he didn't notice, but he did. Everything she did, he noticed. And every once in a while, when she turns her head towards his way at the right time, they would lock eyes and they would have a moment. But then he remembers, so he looks away as if he didn't see her. As if everything never happened. But he knows it all happened. Because it's been far too long since someone made him feel this way....

Foreword

She walked in shyly, head down, and movements small. A new face, he thought. The club didn't look like her usual scene. She looked too out of place. But she was interesting, so he watched. 

She makes a mistake that makes everyone stop and stare at her.

She fidgets then lowers herself to clean up the broken pieces of glass, when he swoops in and takes her hand and leads her away to a table.

She smiles thankfully and introduces herself.

And that's where he felt it. 

This girl is special and he knew he was just going to make a mistake.

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xXJellaBeanXx #1
Chapter 1: This fanfiction was soo good and it made me sad in some parts like when Tiffany thought that he didn't love her and just...AHHHH! btw I really liked how you alternated between the flashbacks and the dialogue in the Third Person POV. Nice Job!
Rachel_ss
#2
Chapter 1: woah!! this is so good. I love this
vinarinako
#3
Chapter 1: TT u TT HBH fics!! Thank you!!
Bts_army13 #4
Chapter 1: Thank you thank you thank you <3 <3
alammonayan
#5
Chapter 1: hahaha... im thinking of making a similar story like this but not exactly like this.. xD anyways! it's good.. xD
Putnadya #6
Chapter 1: Omg i love this fanfict- SO MUCHHHHH. Please make an sequel or smth author nim!!!!!
JamMelchor #7
Chapter 1: Bless you!!!
sparklesacid #8
Chapter 1: im crying . good job <3
anhphuong289 #9
The story is greater than i expected. I saw your comment on utube haha more chaps pls
miggy_ss #10
Chapter 1: im the one who commented the ''SOMEONE CONTINUE THIS IN AFF'' hahah so thankful bc you made this agghh!! the feels!!!!!