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Cordelia's Tale

Hi guys! :))

*waves*

Thanks for reading my story, and I hope you enjoyed at least a bit of it. ^.^

This is my first time ever posting a story so I hope you can tell me how you found the story to be, and point out my mistakes so I can learn. Please comment if you can, because I appreciate every reply, and I hope to make more friends on this site.

Bye bye!

 

(Edit: I completely forgot to add in my prompts here, oops. This is a twist on "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Andersen, and inspired by EXO's "Baby Don't Cry". Thanks!)

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arosequartz #1
Chapter 1: This took such an interesting turn! You write beautifully,making sure each detail is there. It was incredibally artisitic and I really admire thenway you write. I wish I could write as intricate and beautifully as you. You may be young but you write almost professionally, almost, it needs a little work but you're close. I'm keeping this story in one of my labels. Congrats, this was a beautiful story.
PurpleFreak96 #2
Chapter 2: This is quite similar to 'The Little Mermaid', but your writing is really good :)
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