Eternity

Description

They couldn't save Ten, but maybe they can still save themselves.

Foreword

 
“Aren’t the others gonna come?”
 
Doyoung shrugs. “We called them, but they were busy. They always are. I’m not telling them anymore when we decide to meet, I’m gonna wait for them to ask first.”
 
Johnny nods in understanding, not really knowing what else to say. Of course, he can get why Doyoung is so pissed off at the rest of their friends, but he also knows that things haven’t been exactly the same since Ten silently faded away from them. 

 

 

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After two or more years being a silent reader around here, I just decided to write this for a friend a few days ago and here I am now, sharing it with y'all! Shoutout to her for forcing me to post it lol I really wasn't planning on sharing any of my stuff but oh well. Just wanted to clarify a couple things though: my first language is not english cause it just happens to be spanish so please have mercy on my grammar. Also, originally the lead character was a girl so I'm fixing all the pronouns and names in a hurry. Have mercy on that too. Well, all comments are appreciated! And that's all for now. Thank u guys.

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atreeisatreeisatree #1
So sad but so beautifully written. Thank you for the story!
drunkada
#2
Chapter 1: the story was sad, but their friendship is beautiful. thank you for writing this.
exotwelves
#3
Chapter 1: This is sooo beautiful and i can't ing type properly right now because my tears won't stop from coming out of my eyes T^T

From the start until the very last word, it gave me too much feels. I'm sorry i can't give a lobger comment. I have so much to say aboit this fic but i just can't find the ability in me to express it through words. I feel too sappy to think of any feedback i'm so sorry

But i just really really want you to know that this, despite the angst, is one of the best nct fiction i've read so far. Amd just how beautiful this is. Thanks for sharing this story.
Beth22_woofie
#4
Chapter 1: this is the most depressingly beautiful story i've,, wish you could write more...because the style of ur writing is the kind I love most.. please write more JohnTen or so...I'd really love to read more of ur work^^

i cried at this para...

As he gets up, he goes a few steps backwards before running to the edge of the rooftop, stopping just as the railing hits his waist to follow Jaehyun’s joke. When he looks down, the younger is beaming at him once again, so sincerely and so beautifully, but Doyoung lets out a loud yelp and hurries back inside. Johnny smiles back at Jaehyun, knowing Doyoung will be up there again in a few seconds to slap him too, but before he has a chance to do it, Johnny traps him between him arms.

the beauty of the moment..i reread that paragraph a few times...
enuf with the long comment..thank you for writing this...though i didn't comment on the first time reading this
stanwendy
#5
Chapter 1: I'm crying TT^TT
OnKeyMVP
#6
Wow... This was so sad but beautiful... Thank you for writing it!
sheriko #7
Chapter 1: that was nice:)
chewychoc-o
#8
Chapter 1: WOW! I LIKE THIS
authntc
#9
OMG I LIKE THIS!
sweetyyeol #10
Chapter 1: omg idk how to put this with words but this really is beautiful omg