Chapter 15: Don't even know why there even a rock. Thats cute lol omo ryeowoogie is so excited to meet his boyfie, even though you are excited as , you need to be careful ryeonggu ♡

Chapter 20: I don't think you should give up on writing, it just takes a long time to establish yourself as a writer. And you actually have to keep at it to become better. But I didn't have the number of comments in my first stories that I get now. Far from it. Or the number of subscribers. In the last comment, I explained how we manage to get large numbers of subscribers. But the large numbers of comments come from having a large number of people reading each story and that takes years to establish. It requires work and patience. I might get 20 or more comments for an update (and that's about as good as it gets), but that's with 200+ subscribers to that story. I average about 10% of my readers commenting per chapter/update...and it's usually the same people each time. If you only have 10-20 subscribers, then one or two comments is about the average. You have to write a lot of stories to build up the number of people who read your stories in order to get large numbers of comments. That's the honest truth. And there are still times I get a small number for an update and I'm like WTF?! That's just how it goes sometimes. If the main reason you're writing fanfics isn't mostly because you just really love to write, then you'll probably end up disappointed.
Believe it or not, that was meant to be a pep talk. But I'm just not going to sugar coat it. Most of our readers aren't going to beg you to keep writing and they aren't going to comment. You have to write because you want to...maybe even because you need to.

Chapter 16: The reason you have few subscribers is because you don't adjust your settings to 'subscribers only' like the rest of us do. You might think that you're allowing more people to read your work--like those without accounts--but you'll never have an accurate idea of how many people are reading the fic that way AND it ends up forcing people to get accounts if they want to read your stories (which means they'll also be able to start commenting because you can't comment without an account). It's actually a win-win to do that to most of your stories. Some of my older ones I still haven't adjusted to subscriber-only, but I kind of figure that's bait to get them hooked on my writing and if they want to read more, they have to subscribe. Most people won't subscribe unless you force them to.

Chapter 5: I just started reading these, which is why you haven't heard from me before now. This one is particularly cute because even I haven't really thought too hard on how his voice might change when he talks to someone he loves, but I can totally see that.

Chapter 20: Hi Hi!!!!
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading your stories! It makes me sad that you think you aren't a popular author TT____TT
I absolutely adore your stories! :D
But I understand that you need time, writing can be exhausting sometimes... and when you lose confidence, writing becomes that much harder. So get some well deserved rest and write when you feel like you're happy! Because when you write because you just want to, I think then you somehow feel a huge weight has been lifted off your shoulders :D
We'll be waiting for you!

PS: Blowfish was hilarious!! Naughty Kyuhyun! XD

Chapter 20: Its alright... You can take your time! Just dont stop shipping kyuwook kekekkeek . Your story are good honestly :)) byebye too

seems interesting

Chapter 20: Awww, it's alright. Authors would take time to build up their reputation too. I understand your wishes, just don't stop writing! You don't have to post it, maybe you can self mark it? IDK but don't give up ok? Just know that there will be people waiting for you here. JYJY ^^

Chapter 19: HAHAHA lol srsly? It's called a blowfish cos it puffs up like a balloon when threatened. When I was reading about the blowing part, I knew that someone would say something lol. This was quite funny, maybe you would want to try a food series? Thanks for the update!

Chapter 17: *Cries* This reminds me of Wookie's enlistment date T_T I guess there is always a feeling of insecurity that their girlfriends will leave them if they join the army which is why most boys dread that time or find a girlfriend after their enlistment ends. Thanks for updating!