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Introduction

Title: our beloved girl
Author: Ahua
Length: Continued
Genre: romance, music, friendship, family
Cast: You (boys) as Lie Ryuko
Lie Shoko (fiction)
SuJu Members (Leeteuk, Kyuhyun, Siwon)
Member SNSD (Jessica, Tiffany, Sunny, sooyong, Taeyeon)


Other cast: other SNSD Member
Other SuJu Member
Taecyeon
BOA
(Still Secret)





Introduction
Lee Jing SooHee
# Call Jing Soo, Soo (calls from sung)
# Nature lovers
# Impressed cold person but otherwise if it is known
# Having talent in the field of music and dance
# Forgetful but always remember if it hurt
# Got a relationship with Lsm, Leeteuk, Kyuhyun (will be revealed later)
# Having the nature of the mysterious
# Brother of Lie Sung
# Year of birth 1985
# Education: Student at Kyunghee University, Post Modern Music

Lee sung Dongwon
# Call Sung
# Handsome
# Good and easy to get along
# Loving family, especially his brother
# Brother of Lie Jing Soo
# Singer on SM
# Year of birth 1983
# SuJu member?
# Education: Student at Kyunghee University, Post Modern Music

Lee family
Father : Lee Ho Mun
Mother: Ni Hun Choi
Brother: Lee Sung Dongwon
Younger Brother: Lee Soo Hee Jing

Lee is a family of wealthy families are housed in seoul, Lee Mun himself is the owner of Hyundai department store, but he also respects his son choice who want to become a singing star.
Lee Sung is the brother who was very fond of his younger brother, Sung himself was a singer under the auspices of the SM, and Jing Soo was a younger brother who adored her brother and aspires to become a singer
Sung himself received in SM after passing through several auditions and trained at SM Academy for 3 years and 2 months, and Jing Soo itself also trained at SM Academy, but still a beginner

Chapter 1

# Lee family house (2004) Sung 21 years old and Soo 19 years old
"Sung .. your age is 21 but there has been no girlfriend, what should omma Match??" While looking towards the Sung
"Ouch omma a, i am still 21 years old, and again I want to be a singer, not unthinkable made to find a girlfriend" said the Sung while entering items into the bag
"Then you Soo,Where would continue to university? might as well work in place of the father " begged Appa on the Soo who was drinking his coffee cappuccino
"Appa .. I also want to be a singer like hyung" he replied casually
"You think about it carefully Soo" said Mr. Lee as he headed for the door go to the office
"Sung and Soo .. can you accompany omma today?? Today only" glancing at them both
Sung and Soo was compact and replied "CAN NOT!" As he ran toward the car
"for some reason this feels uneasy hearts today " said omma while muttering to himself

# SM Academy (late afternoon to go home)

Sung: "soo .. ready yet?"
Jing Soo: "not yet" (as he packed up belongings )
Leeteuk: "fixed compact brother and a younger brother of this " (appears suddenly behind Sung).
"Aigoo ... you are like so shocking people, appear suddenly too " Sung said, holding his chest and glared towards Leeteuk
Leeteuk: "haha .. It bothers you the most fun, because Sung's never angry "
"Streez" said Sung spontaneous to Leeteuk
Leeteuk: "I am going home first Sung"
"Ok" said Sung, who again checked his bags

@ Sung POV

""Wow damn Leeteuk, each time surprised me alone, out of nowhere" I whispered to myself
"Oh Soo ready yet?" I said, checking bags, and not how long the Soo came out with his bag and took me home


When on the road we saw auditions held by where we take shelter of SM
And this audition has reached the final round.

My heart was beating fast and heat saw the woman who sang in front of me
Despite not knowing his name and only first meeting, I guess I fall in love with a woman in front of me

I also invite Soo watched until finished and it turns out the woman who has made me fall in love turned out champion in best vocal nomination, how glad I saw that beautiful smile
But the pleasure was disturbed after Soo pulled my bag and said time to go home.


@ Jing Soo POV

"Huh .. what the heck its nice to see it while hyung own audition was going to form his own club" I whispered to myself
Yet again want to hurry home because tired, "uh .. hyung looked greeted?" I whispered into mind after seeing the face of such a serious hyung

Wow .. Who the hell is a girl, sweet smile just once ... soo this the reason why hyung could bear to see this audition

And when reading the winner of a girl who has a beautiful smile has become a champion in the best vocal
"Awesome" I whispered in my mind
"Let us go home Hyung,”what time is it" pulling hyung bag
After I had managed to call a Taxi

# TAXI
@ Author POV

"Hyung love that girl right?" Said Soo as he nudged hyung arm
Sung, who again thought the woman was immediately unconscious and spontaneous pounds immediately responded "Ne!"

Soo who hear the word "ne?" surprised and say "MO?" Out loud while answering spontaneous Sung looked embarrassed as he said "MWooo .... Ani Ani .. .."

Both brothers are joking in the car and Soo were once again trying to talk seriously
"hyung's already another moment would form a group, about a group like what? "said Soo curious
"Want to know .... no .. I will tell you a secret" he replied easily
"Then I see you liked that girl hyung? To be honest cause I think i fall in love with the champion of the best vocal" ask Soo directly and make Sung surprised"that girl make us both fall in love "replay Sung
“Jinja?” Reply Soo

When the conversation going from the left they appear Truck and hit they taxi

BRUUUMmm!! cars to spin 2 times BUUKKKKK!!
are left only silence and the smell of gasoline .......
 

to be continue...