I have squeezed all the old chapters I have written in 1 chapter so that it wouldn't be so confusing. I will be rewriting the chapters and changing some characters and artist!
Chapter 10: Hey! I hope it'll get better for you soon enough, much love from me. I genuinely really love this story of yours. It's good. I hope to read more updates soon. xxxx
Chapter 6: YOO why doesn't he have any pupils!? Omg this is really interesting. I hope Hongbin ends up happy. He's so cornered by everyone rn. I like Tao's character already!! Keep it up authornim! :)
Chapter 6: ok so I caught up on Chapter 2.
Hongbin can be really adorable sometimes. Like with Taka and Tao. WITH TAO ITS AMAZING HAHA THE BANTER WAS RLLY ENTERTAINING. I'm the type of reader who sympathizes with the protagonist rlly fast so yea MY HEART LITERALLY ACHES FOR HONGBIN. He's so lonely and alone, I literally want to punch everyone who calls him an useless rich kid :((
COULD U PLEASE NOT LET HIM GET A SAD ENDING, PLS PLS PLEASEEEE. Please let him find love or something, he needs it in his life. It must be so painful living like that damn. I'm also so worried, what if he gets caught ugh and how could his parents sell him off or whatever how just wow.
also fun fact - Taka happens to be what Bangladesh's currency is called haha
Chapter 5: I suggest you to divide it into parts. I think it would be better than incomplete.
I like the details you wrote in the chapters it makes the plot more interesting keep it up ♥
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