Chapter 1: I hate you. Why you keep making me love you ?
thank you for this. Really. I love it. I love your writing. I love your stories. Please update soon your othet stories. I'll be waiting. Fighting authornim
Chapter 1: MarkBum! ♡ They are like, made for each other!
Jaebum's injury news managed to make me cry for several times already, specially during the two days of their Seoul concert ;( Hope he will get well soon ;-;
Just a small suggestion here; I think it's better if you can divide this chapter in to smaller paragraphs, so it would be easier to understand it~
Chapter 1: I see some errors here and there(i understand though), but i like the story ;) I think he's still trying to do things (fanmeetings,etc.) And i don't want our precious oppa to push himself, i hope he gets better soon and that he doesn't torture himself!
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