Break-up

hey guys!! I really love that chapter 12... ahaha.. I had fun writing it. sad to say its only short - my dad was already angry coz I'm not sleeping yet.. guys, I just wanted to ask you, is the POVs thingy okay for you?? =], just tell me if you can't understand that one..

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RECAP:

"wei, Ariel! Are you okay?" Ella asked

"do I looked like I'm okay??" Ariel said

"oh... sorry" Ella replied

"huh!!! so much pain! why do I have to suffer! whoo! so irritating... I can't even move it.. so painful!" Ariel again comlained

"wei, Ariel, stop moving! it will be more painful if you move much" Aaron said worriedly

[END OF RECAP]

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=ARIEL's POV=

"ok! okay!! but I'm not comfortable! grrr.!" I told them uncomfortable with the way I'm positioned

I heard them all sighed

"wei, I just remembered!" Gui shouted significantly

"what is it??" I asked her curiously

"how's your kiss?" Gui asked me with a sweet smile

-I just remembered what happened,

"I don't like to talk abaut it, what will I do?" I said in my mind

-I pretended to sleep, I tried to snore-

'wei! don't pretend!!!!!" Gui shouted

-I still continued to pretend, suddenly, I felt someone tap my legs, I opened my eyes widely-

"ouchhh!!!" I shouted in pain but couldn't move

"who's that!!!!" I asked madly

-they pointed at Gui-

"hey you!!!" I shouted but got cutted

"what?!? tell us! please! please!..." Gui said while shaking her body

=NO ONEs POV=

"wei! stop it! it's painful!!!" Ariel said

"what now??" Gui said

"ok, okay!" Ariel agreed

"when I got back at the stage... Micheal is in bad mood, maybe, he's irritated with the noise, then something happened... I saw Micheal felt sorry.. but I knew it wasn't for me, I followed the direction where he was looking and I saw a girl..." then Ariel stopped

"and then??" ella asked

"I saw that girl, looking at us madly... when Micheal left, she cried secretly... so I wanted to go there but I didn't knew that the floor was waxed, I slipped from the staircase down to the ground, the next thing I knew, I was here, the doctor was doing exray on me, then..." Ariel got cut

"what does that girl looked like??" Chun asked

"wei, Why are you investigating?? I'm like a prisoner that way! you asked so many Questions! I don't like anymore!" Ariel said

"who's that girl??" Gui asked whispering

AT THE SCHOOL (Micheal's part)

=near the tree, Micheal was talking with a girl=

"hey! I saw it with my own eyes!! you're the one who kissed that gurl!" She shouted madly

"wei..sorry, I didn't mean it.. Jia-Hui, please listen!! I'm in bad ood that time..." Micheal tries to explain

"huh! I don't like to listen to your excuse! I don't like to see you anymore! don't even there to! I'm going now!" Jia-Hui shouted madly

"okay then! I'm trying to explain you don't listen! okay! FINE! I'll not see you anymore!!! I hate you! I don't even know why girls are so stupid like you.!!" Micheal heat-up in anger and that words suddenly came out of his mouth

-Jia-Hui ran away from Micheal, Micheal is still just frozen there, can't believe he'd say that-

-the next moment, Micheal was swimming at their school pool, tiring him self, wanting him self to suffer-

=MICHEAL's POV=

"God! why do I have to suffer like that!! why did I had fight with her?? now, I think I can't live wihout her, Why am I so stupid! I hate my self! I don't want to live anymre!!" I said drowning intentionally, Finally I lost my vision and woke up later on, lying on the side-pool with Chun and Aaron by my side

"finally! you're awake!!!" I heared him, shouting

"what happened to you!?" Aaron asked me

"don't like to talk abaut it!" I refused and got up

"let's go to class! lunch break is over!" I told them, heading at the classroom

CLASSROOM:

=No ONE's POV=

-when they were 1 meter away from their classroom, they heared a voice called them from their back-

-they turned back-

"oh! Miss... Good afternoon!" they greeted

"good afternoon! wei, will you not come at the hospital??" The teacher asked

"No, we already visited" Chun replied

"oh... if you wanted to visit there, it's okay, I'll permit you, just tell me, okay??" she said

"okay miss!" Aaron and chun replied

"oh, I'll not go there first..." Micheal said

"why not? I forgot, Micheal, You're incharge of Ariel when she's here at school, She surely need assistance" Miss said

"oh,, okay. but why me?" Micheal asked

"coz you're her partner in your project, you're responsible for that!" The teacher explained

"oh... fine" Micheal agreed then the teacher leaves

- he agreed but inside him, he was angry, flaming with fire... mad at Ariel -

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Hey! sorry for that BORING update!!

but, next time, I'll try to make it more interesting! I promise! I'll think it over this night! okay? just wait and see! ahaha! please continue to support!

COMENTS!!!

by the way, Jia-Hui is the girl from Summer-X-Summer, one of the dramas of Joe Cheng (Micheal)

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