Chapter 1: It's a very intricate story and very well written good job

This is so beautiful and poetic. The last line was touching and a gold nugget of wisdom. Two thumbs up!

Awesome story ~ ^^ henber cuties .

it's so beautiful, the love of parents towards their daughter :') <3 <3 <3 <br />
s!b my eyes got all watery because of it T^T the story is sooo beautiful

Loved your story!! <br />
it was very well written, hope you write more fics, awesome job!! ^_^

Tbh what I really see here is a parents' love for their child and what they're willing to sacrifice for her. This is beautifully written and I LOVE it! Nonetheless, henber is very cute in here too especially their farewell scene.<br />
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2 thumbs up!!