Chapter 1: You always start the story very well, describing the feelings properly but you always end the story in a rush. I wish the second half was a little longer. But it was a sweet story.

Chapter 1: Hanbin is really obsessive over the Jinhwan~ Cute hehe~ But the ending though... Kim Hanbin, don't you dare to do that to your INNOCENT hyung!

meh. just some constructive criticism but i (and a lot of people) personally find it really distasteful when authors use things such as the idea of and suicide for humour, but whatever. i know it's just a mention but it's so unnecessary to me, as if the author doesn't take it seriously... maybe other people will enjoy it.

Chapter 1: this ff really make my day
Thank u author nim ^_^

Chapter 1: don't you believe.?
I'm smiling to this whole chapter.!
I like it so much when it comes to pity Hanbin. :3
Jinan is being so clueless and innocent.
don't you dare to him, Hanbin.!!
there's some typos. If you don't mind, try to edit that. you write Hanbin's name Hanvin. hahaa.. :D
that Hanbyul chocolate stealing part just too hilarious.! nice nice niceee..