Chapter 1: NO.NO.NO.NO. YOU CANNOT END IT THIS WAY. It's hurting my feeeeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssss. on the other hand, i really enjoyed the story. it was very nice.

Don't say sorry! I love your one shot ff :')

This is my favorite kind of story!!!! <br />
This is really amazing. I CRIED :) :( <br />
Wow. Just pure awesomeness. <br />
It has deep meaning and I LOVE it SO much. You did a really great job with this! <br />
Fighting!

It's really good. And sad. :(

Ah, almost cried :/

Aw man, why'd she hafta die :(