AWWW~~~it's a....sad story? ;( <br />
but i'm glad Aaron still have Ai Lun with him. <br />
but-but i don't like Hebe in this!!! she could've at least listen to Gui's and Yatou's explaination first before running away?<br />
Gosh!i don't want to blame her but she's the reason of Gui's death! <br />
if I was Aaron i would never forgive her for doing that to his wife! HMP!!! >:[ <br />
anyways,i'll be waiting for your Pi Li MIT's sequel! XD <br />
post it up soon!
@GuilunLovers01<br />
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Thanks for the advice. I did change her name to Ai Lun.<br />
I couldn't think of any name so I just wrote it down.<br />
Thank you very much.
It's a great story, but, Gui Gui's gone.... ;(<br />
Still beautiful though, don't get me wrong... XD<br />
I just have this problem, would mind changing 'Ai Ya Lun' to something like......<br />
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'Yan Ai Lun' ?<br />
Considering the fact that......Aaron is Yan Ya Lun, his family name is 'Yan', so his daughter must have 'Yan' as a first name, and....The name 'Ya Lun' isn't for girls, changing her name to 'Ai Lun' would be better, thank you :)
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