Chapter 2: Hi, here I am :p
Thanks for introducing me to this! I have not heard about the drama before, but now I'm curious!
I think you portray their characters well, that I could understand and like both Shu Hai and Hong Pei. A messy otaku and a funny ghost spirit thing!
Plus, Hong Pei looks really handsome xD I would so try to find and watch it one day.
The grammars could be improved though :)
Do write more!