Chapter 2: This story was short but beautifully written, Im amazed. You did an awesome job. I had to take a moment when I understood what was coming at the end, I didnt want Jimin to disappear *sobs forever*.
So sad :( but at the same time, thats what we all did to our toys. Omg now I feel bad toward my plushies and toys. damn why would you do that to me :'''''(

Bur seriously, I really loved this story!!!

Chapter 2: Ahhhh it remi ds me of the darnish story about the sherperdess and the chimney sweeper......omg jimin's gone the next day.....yoongi omg my tears .....i like it very much keep up author nim.

Chapter 2: This story was amazing, it was written really well^^ ahhh the ending though, whyyyyy I thought this'll be a happy story and in the end one had disappeared:'(

I've read this after you let me read it, and i'm sorry for commenting late lol. But.. I really thought this was some fluff stuff and i'm really surprised when it ended being angsty i had to stop for a moment, breathe and take a minute to calm down the feels ㅠㅠ Oh why you do this to meeee! And i swear from the bottom of myheart, this is one of the best oneshot i've ever read. And your writing skills is so perfect!! I'm really moved with every words written on your story, it's like it drags also the reader to feel the emotion that the characters feel (mainly Yoongi) ㅠㅠ My heart is still aching tho, now what will happen to Yoongi now that his beloved Jimin was gooone ㅠㅠ why do have to make me cry ㅠㅠ But all in all this story is perfect, i love it. I super love it!! Pls make more stories in the future, i swear your skill in writing is amazing just like you put the right words in its right places making the story feels like in a reality. ( pero leche tlga ung mommy nung girl, sarap chopchopin, napakaburara! Jemeeeen balik ka na miss ka na ni Yoongeee!! ㅠ__ㅠ)

Chapter 2: NOOOOOOO!!!! The is the mother's problem?! Why the hell does she keep dropping Jimin?! She's a grown mothering woman she shouldn't be dropping things all over the place!

I love how even your inner monologue for Yoongi (as a toy) is from the perspective of someone who only knows a life of toys. Like when you said a bunch of "building blocks were burying him alive" if this weren't a toy au you could have used something else instead of building blocks, probably a more common expression like "rocks" or "dirt" but since he is a toy you fit it to his perceptions and what he knows of life and that is amazing. That's some writing skills right there.

ING ! No....no, no no no no no what happened to Jimin?! Where did he go?! Please tell me that the mom just took him to fix him or something and she didn't just throw him away or something. God . WHY DID THIS COMPETELY SHATTER MY PORCELAIN HEART?!

I loved this a lot. Like a lot a lot. This was awesome and you should write more. Serious. You got it going on. I will read whatever else you write because this was amazing and hit all the right feels and I'm just dead inside but also alive cuz this fic gave me life.

Someone help.

Chapter 1: This is like Toy Story but infinitely more beautiful....I love the aesthetics of this already. The words you choose to describe them are simply mesmerizing as well. I love this.