It's Alright If You Leave Me

Description

Taekwoon is suffering and Ravi is proof of that.

Foreword

This has been completed a few months now and it's been through the editing process several times but . . . Well, if I don't force myself to put it out, it'll never make it. Based off LR's Beautiful Liar MV.

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WooziAKASaTaN
#1
Chapter 1: This right here is a huge reason why I’m proud to be a Starlight. This fandom is so artistic, just like VIXX. At the moment I’m kinda tired so forgive my lacking comment. Your story helped me understand the MV a little better so I thank you for that. Your interpretation of the MV wansnt too complicated to understand and the way you write is beautiful and elegant yet easy to read which is my favorite style of writing. I hope to one day be as good of a writer as you are.
Howtealightful #2
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time, I've been listening to Beautiful Liar all night so it's only fitting that I would find and read this now, thank you for this amazing writing. I feel like my heart has been ripped out of my chest
mspeachykeen2012 #3
Oh my... This was... Beautiful and heart wrenching and amazing.

I'll put my spoiler in a reply, lol, but just... Wow. You've always moved me with your writing and as some commenters have mentioned, if I've read one Beautiful Liar interpretation/representation fic, I've read a hundred. I think it's because that MV was so... Good and had all these elements and you couldn't help but want to write about it. Yours is among my favorites, I can't say that enough. The flow, the words, the picture it painted-- it literally painted the same pictures in the MV but almost in like... Watercolor if that makes sense? Like it was real but not and ugh, I'm not explaining myself well. It's because this was beautiful. Thank you so much for writing and sharing (I understand rewrites and rewrites) bc this was a gift.

Thank you! <3
iRovix
#4
Chapter 1: Omg, I'm not going to lie but the lines

"Ravi got up from the piano stool and motions for Taekwoon to sit. Taekwoon sits. Ravi motions for Taekwoon to play. Taekwoon begins to play."

really got to me. I actually started tearing up. Yes, it was one for the more less complex lines in the story but goddamm that hit me in the feels. Brilliant.
byeoleo
#5
Chapter 1: this really goes along their mv just so perfectly, like this is the only storyline I'm ever going to go by now. your writing is always so beautiful, even with a raw twist to it, and it always leaves me so emotional. simply amazing, I seriously always hope that your writing gets more attention bc that's what it deserves. powerful and simply amazing, thank you so much.
TheLostViking
#6
Chapter 1: Iiiiiiiii so haunting! I really like it though, I could clearly picture the mv all along. Good job!
dangerkittyn
#7
Chapter 1: Oh... ohhhhhhhhhhh.... oh this was wonderful. This was absolutely beautiful. Ahh my heart is both hollow and full from reading this. I love this, I love it so much. I love the way you wrote the juxtaposition of Taekwoon and Ravi and how they are the same coin that can be flipped both ways. I adore the raw pain and emotion as well as the muted and deaf defeat displayed. This is absolutely wonderful and relatable. Anazing, truly.
SugarFreeSuga
#8
Chapter 1: This has gotta be the best interpretation of Beautiful Liar ever. Read as much fics that revolves around the same idea yet none can rival this, it's so heartbreaking yet awfully beautiful.
liesonfloor #9
I've seen a lot of fics interpreting the Beautiful Liar mv, but this one is by far my favorite. The story you tell from those scenes match so closely the feeling I got from the video, but digging deeper into the characters themselves.

And your writing! So incredibly beautiful as always, still bringing that powerful emotion even when seen through taekwoons muted, defeated viewpoint. I'm so happy you wrote this <3
ara_kt #10
Chapter 1: This is really nice. I like it a lot. It wasn't too long or too short, it was a pleasant length, but I almost wished for more. I actually kind of felt a little sad while reading it. I could really picture the music video while reading it. This is something I would read over and over again.