Chapter 1: I keep coming back to this piece of heaven

Chapter 1: god..... this was amazing and I knew the water meant something horrible but-
my baby.... They both kinda ed up, jesus

Chapter 1: Wow... Just wow... I've read this at least ten times since I found it and it never hurts any less... Great job, excellent writing style, crushingly sad...

Is 2:47 am the time of his death?i

Chapter 1: Holy ! That's an awful way to die. Emo af. dude. That was awesome (not really but you get me)

that made me so sad great job at setting the entire narrative it was beautiful!! hope you write more soon bc your writing is truly phenomenal! <3

Chapter 1: Could you like do a sequel with Kyungil's reaction?

Chapter 1: It's 00:30 am and I feel dead inside. My heart can't take all this angst!

Oh dear lord... first of all, the plot is so angsty I love it, people should read it because damn!
second: your writting tehnique is sooooooo great ;;;

Chapter 1: Why are you so evil? DONT BE SO MEAN TO ME!