Chapter 3: Gosh, this is so beautifully written! Kudos to you, really! I loved it to bits and also I love how you made everything both everything and its very opposite, exactly like I like to think about things and how most of the things look to me. I can really relate to your point of view, so I felt the urge to write this comment ahah there were certain things that I couldn't fully understand but I can put up with it (there are certain things in stories that don't have to be told. And I agree in the measure that this makes the reader feel part of the story because they can use their imagination). I still don't understand what exactly their relationship defines as and I'm not sure if I'm okay with it just being natural or official. Well, being both would be okay, but as much as I'm sure about jackson's feelings, I'm still not sure about mark's. This is why, I'd really like to know a piece of his mind too ahah
and again, I really want to compliment you for your writing!
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