Chapter 4: Thoughts: I personally think your storyline is good (: Schoollife fics are a little difficult to write because of repetitive classes and it usually bores out some readers but your fic is great! You really use each and every character which is always a plus! One thing I would recommend is to review everytime you write. I use Microsoft Word and it works for me in terms of spelling errors, missing punctuations, etc. All in all I think your story is BRILLIANT and I hope you keep up your amazing effort and motivation as a writer! Good Luck <3 <3
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