Chapter 1: Hi ming :-) I found your name here and there on tourmaline stories...so I decide to explore your profile and your stories because I'm still new in reading EXOPINK stories.....and I really really really love your writing style....you really makes me smile with their characters especially Bomi...hehe...I don't really read ChanMi before....my favourite OTP is ChenJi, but now I think I would love to read more about ChanMi...thank you dear for making me believe that this couple is so sweet and so in love...you really know how to choose your words...I don't really like to read extreme so I really appreciate this kind of story with a little bit of it...thank you so much for this dear :-)

Chapter 1: So I just remembered that I never actually left a comment... and I re-read this again.
Reading this at work is totally not recommended because I ended up having this stupid grin on my face. Probably erted grin.

I want to write my fav part but I'll end up copy paste everything because I love thissss
Even though I often write chanmi but I rarely read them so it feels... intense??? Basically I'm really really happy, thank you for writing chanmi

When you told me you're going to write savage bomi I tried to guess what is it, I thought maybe bomi keeps on asking chanyeol to do it. I never expected a tape. I legit stopped reading and clapped like a seal.
On another note, is that wealthy person who offers money is me--although you write 'he' and I'm not wealthy-- but yeah I'll pay for chanmi tape...... /disappear into the darkness/

I love how you write from chanyeol's perspective, his inner conflict, he seems like he adores Bomi so much and tolerates her... um, quirkiness. This relationship is, uuggghhh. freaking adorable. and y.
that library scene. yes please. please continue that.
(if this is continue I'll end up revealing my dark side.......)
"She rests her foot on everything, even Baekhyun’s face." Idk, I like this.
And girl can ped a zipper with socked feet? Sounds hard so. Kudos.

Although he's just cameo-ing, but I like Baekhyun's here! when he picked up the phone and call Bomi 'wench'. correct me if im wrong, the term is rude, right?

Then the in the last scene. Actually it's more like chanyeol's thirst than .
"You want to travel. With me. You included me there so it will be nice if I can help you to fulfil that.”
UUUGHHHH FEEELIINGGSSSSSS
'She wears a big white shirt (his) --- the beautiful curves of her body (also his)'
'the -side of him almost wanted to respond with ‘I always prefer you wet’.
which is this. the jerk one or the real

ming you have way with wordsss

Chapter 1: OH gosh. the first thing I read in 2016 is chanmi being -- it's actually just bomi. and the first thing I read in 2016 is left me hanging because GIRL, YOU CAN'T JUST STOP RIGHT THERE AND LET US WONDERING CHANMI TAPE (that wig--that fake tattoos--)

I swear I want to keep the fandom clean from weird-- stories, but on the other side, I WANT MORE (now, it's more like 80:20) lol you and nico-- both of you wrecked me. Bye. I still don't want to ride the exopink's writer train (but I demand more stories from both of you LOL)

I just wanted to comment about the things but ming, your choice of words can't be ignored fo sho. I really love how you described chanyeol's inner thought. and that--Bomi can be as hell, dangerous as hell, hot as hell, savage as hell, coming from hell-- brilliant! and of course that monosyllabic thing (the smartest word a baekhyun would use)

well done babe!!!!!! don't stop writing /same advice to myself/ and I MISS KRIS' story. If you ever take request.. can you make one for meeeeeeeee? *put bomi's sparkling eyes here*

Chapter 1: I'M SCREAMINGGGG!! MING YOU SAVAGEEE!

this is so...i have no words. it already got me gaping at the declaration of bomi's idea. what the hell is wrong with her? lol. but it's sweet because she just wants to help. That's...some help...

the library scene is so nerve-wrecking! bomi's acknowledging his 's potential though. lol that line got me laughing so hard. she's such a bully! and chanyeol is right that their differences in character is why he's too weak for her.

"No one uses YOLO anymore " i keep it in my mind to comment on that when i read the foreword. Turns out chanyeol said it too.
Bomi's rap OMG I'M CRYINGggg that line somehow sounds so like what bomi will produce if she ever writes rap line. i mean, we all heard her rap.. i laughed so hard at that line omg ming please never stay away from writing comedy, you genius.

“My hair is still wet.” She says and the -side of him almost wanted to respond with ‘I always prefer you wet’.
I can't breathe at this line. It's so sensual. well, i prefer chanyeol's side.
now i kind of know why you insisted that kids shouldn't read this. the references ... you're playing savage.

the ending is not enoughhhhh. why it stops thereeee! I want more! *i sound but this is a rare piece in this fandom pleaseee reconsider your ending.

you already write two of *mature* stories. can i have more.. with kaieun? lol, thanks for this baby!

Chapter 1: NO NO NOOOOOO COMEBACCCCCKKKKKKKKK WHY IS THIS THE END
*praying hard that when you re-edit ming decides to WRITE MORE THAN IMPLIED*
I'll be back later when I already function properly

Please update

Please update soon!! can't wait

KIDS PLEASE DON'T READ. NOONIM WOULD DEFINITELY READ THIS.

I love savage Bomi!~ ^^

WHY THE IS ONLY IMPLIED? WHY?