Tied Tightly with Love

Description

Life was just like the blue skies.

Sometimes it'll turn to grey and dark; hiding the sun beneath the fluffy clouds before thunder and storms trailing behind. When finally it went away, the rainbow comes enchanting the skies with its outstanding colourful forms: brought smiles to all of the livings.

 

Foreword

Hey! this is my first time of writing since I'm a newbie.. and it might be my first experience so I hope the responses given will improve my writing skills.. since I'm not very great in English so please forgive me (n_n)|/

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Solbee #1
Chapter 1: I had trouble when the intro was all about izing his skin color and that the front page was written in the font that all graphic designers hate the most, lol. (I am one!) So I wasn't too sure at first, but once I kept on reading I got into the story. Thankfully your writing, my friend, is super and I hope you write a lot more like this. You are so gifted! Good job! And hooray for Kaisoo!
dreamshade #2
Chapter 1: This is good I would say. At first, it started out as something cute, fluffy, and happy with Kyungsoo and Jongin met each other. Then the relationship started to build from there, leading to a blissful marriage. But towards the end, it became to get angsty. I suspected that the man was Kyungsoo's brother because Kyungsoo said that he'd seen the smirk before. Don't know if it's right, just assuming. Anyway, I'll wait for Jongin's POV and gosh, I badly wish that both of them are saved. It will be great if you decide to extend this story, dear, because your writing is decent and you have the potential to go further. I hope you will write more in the future! :D
takemetothestar #3
Chapter 1: this is so sad. omigosh, my morning seems gloomier now. hahaha. but i enjoyed it. i feel that this fic could have been longer; into a chaptered fic. did jongin survive? imagine if he did, and kyungsoo didn't, omigosh, i wonder what jongin's POV story would say.
jerraymond_munroe #4
I'm working on Kai's POV but the update may take a very long time.. I don't know, and I don't want to promise anything as of fear to break it..
hope you enjoy reading this fic.. (n_n)\/
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