Ever since Jongin was a child, there was always something under his bed. Now that he has a son of his own, the boy complains about something under his bed too. Jongin does not dismiss it.
Chapter 2: I really love the atmospheric, slightly dark vibe you've embedded within these words. It really me in and didn't let me go until that last ending line. The pacing and characterisation was also superb... still wrapped in some wisps of mist but conveys just enough. It was really well written, thank you so much for sharing!!
That thing with Taemin though.... was he intended to be Jongin's next victim?
Chapter 2: Somehow I can imagine what's the house like, the lake, the patio, the forest. You describe it very well, author-nim. I can also feel the melancholy feeling in this story. And not to mention how satisfying the ending is.
Had to reread a couple of times, but this story is really well thought out and very sad. Poor Jongin suffering from a very young age and Chen being his lifeline. The monster under his bed trying to eat him and Seroquel is a controversial medicine. Some saying it's the best and some saying it's the most toxid antipsychotic medicine against schizophrenia and bipolarity. But I'm glad little Kyungsoo made him find his connection with Chen again and made him want to get better and start over. Really would like to know how this story will end.
Chapter 1: Wow this was written really nicely! I was completely immersed in it. And I loved his relationship with Chen- this was really well written I loved this. Thank you for sharing with us
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