Chapter 1: i really like it... sometimes good stories don't necessarily need to be long. I really like how you develop everything through a flashback, and yes sometimes our first ones never left us, but we do move on...

Chapter 1: It was very sweet until the JERK cheated on her w/her Bestfriend.
Not cool if he did it once he'll do it again.

Out of all the people it had to be her bestfriend. Good for her letting both go even though she still might have a soft spot for him