The Legend of the Silver Sea

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Description

Although they were ready to accept the love they shared,

the world wouldn't be able to do the same.

As the celebrities they had become, the world's opinion was important to them.

So, they agreed to hide their love...

Foreword

This is an EunHae one-shot. I had the idea in my head for a while and finally decided to write it down.

In my limited understanding of Korean, I believe EunHae can be translated as 'Silver Sea'. I loved that fact so much I decided to have some fun with it and wrote this. If my understanding of this translation is wrong, feel free to send me an email correcting me. But for the sake of this story, let's just pretend, K?   =)

I hope you enjoy!   =)

Please remember to leave a comment!

SouthWest
Over 1,000 views!! Thank you everyone for reading 'The Legend of the Silver Sea'! (2/14/2013)

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 1: Very interesting read. It's rather unlike anything I've come across before and fascinating in that regard, if a bit fantastic at times. haha

I enjoyed how you set the stage between them and the summative narration that brought us up to speed with how Eunhyuk and Donghae grew up. The ease with which you write them together, and the understanding that they have of their love against what they know they cannot reveal is quite easy to believe though. It beautifully explains their abundance of skinship in reality and pairs nicely with the fan theory they do have a secret love. haha And the fight too, after things are taken too far, is easy enough to imagine when passions run high and both feel cornered.

I'm curious who the blue eyed, blue haired woman was and where they managed to find a cliff so close to home (wherever home is) but it is a bittersweet tale for them. The ending rings of a fairy tale almost, with the sad reality mixed with the almost magical ending. For something that has virtually no dialogue (other than what is implied), it is a rather full telling, and flows nicely for it. I also have to wonder who the old man was.

All in all an intriguing read. Very imaginative and filled with lots of emotion that was easy to see in the story.
splendid-times #2
Even after time passed, I still remember this fiction of yours and come back to read it.
I remembered reading it sometimes ago but I was unable to comment.
Now I still remember the fiction, so I quickly search for it & even if this done, I still subscribe to this beautiful fiction :) [on my favorite lists] :D

This is just so beautiful :) wonderful one-shot & I can clearly see the scene you were writing up there.
Just like fairy tales, it was nice like that.
ESP when you come to talk about the legend of silver sea, i can clearly feel & imagine the scene.
Even it's sad but I'm glad with the fact that, EunHae always belong to each other, it's the Legend of Silver Sea, EunHae <3

Thank you for this beautiful fiction!!^^
BabyXingXing
#3
woahhh. i love this. its beaufufully written
NaitoGDTOP_Minx
#4
I thought this story was just amazing! It had the flow like old fairy tales I loved as a kid. Hans Christian Anderson, Grimms and the like--Really really well done! Both myth, cautionary tale and folk-story, you really should write more of these if the mood strikes you. Like a collection of mythic story works.
chocolateheartz
#5
Hey Southwest =) I saw your sweet motivating comment on my story, "Going Crazy". Thanks for telling me to keep going =)Just the thing I needed to write another chapter =) Since you were so sweet and read a newbie story's like mines, I decided to check out yours. The Legend of the Silver Sea was so professional written! Are you already a author of a published famous book or something in disguise on asianfanfics? The vocabulary was so advanced and stuff and your story was unique =) This could be a children's book or something lol. I <3 Eunhae and would give them my full support if they confessed their love for each other to the media. The silver sea seems so scary but calm at the same time! People die happy there lol. And when you described that girl with blue hair, Song Jieun from going crazy popped into my mind! Since she has blue hair and all. Even tho Eunhyuk and Donghae met their sad fate in the end, I'm glad they're happy =D Looking forward to more of your works! =D
SuJu_addict12
#6
I always hated it when my OTPs die in a fic. I usually ramble and curse then ramble about it. BUT!! the way that you made this story it just makes me feel happy. Contented, maybe? haha.. GREAT FIC!!!<br />
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And I agree with the review.. If I were to judge it, the score would still be the same!! <33
PinkSilver #7
Oh My GOODD!!!<br />
THE STORY IS SOO CUTEE.. AND SWEET... AND AWASOME.. AND..<br />
AAARRRGGGGHHH.... ^^
SouthWest
#8
Thank you so much, everyone, for liking my one-shot and leaving a comment!! I was hesitant to post it on here, so it's really nice to get such wonderful feedback. <br />
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boredbluejay #9
Amazing story! But I just have to say this: "Nooooo! Eunhyuk! Donghae!"
childishpanda
#10
WOAH! This story is undeniebly, unbelievably GREAT!