Melancholy Of A Star

Description

 

angst and a little bit personal

 

Foreword

 

Title: Melancholy Of A Star

Pairing: Jongin-centric, Kai/Luhan

Rating: G

Word Count: 1,327

Summary: “Kai was the stars and the darkness is Jongin.”

Author’s Note: deerestkrrong said I should write more KaiLu and this what happens. You wrote angst, I’ll give you angst hehe. Thanks for that hug~

Warnings: Unbeta-ed

Disclaimer: Sadly, I have no rights aside from my dysfunctional mind.

P.S.: I’m not sure, but this might be my last post. School is starting and I have a packed schedule ahead of me. But if you guys want to ask me something just hit up my wall or send me a private msg, or if you guys want mention me on twitter (same u/n, no need to follow if you don’t want to, tho I wouldn’t turn down a new friend^^).

 

 

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lilacsky #1
Chapter 1: Loneliness is the easiest ticket to giving up. I know. And how you put that blank look in jongin's eyes into words, no matter what smile he gives or what y move he sways, i just don't see THAT smile he used to radiate when luhan was still around. I might be biased much to kailu. But that's just how i see it :c
taedaebae #2
Chapter 1: separation between kai and jongin. this is heart breaking
like I want to scream "just go and chase him idiot" bt oh well, that's the life of drama T.T
best as always, seonbae <3<3 ha, I really should follow your steps <3<3<3
kikicarolinajung #3
Chapter 1: i wish i could give you a bunch of sushi and cola because whenever i feel like crying, i feel like i want to die, i ate sushi and drank cola
i hope you are okay, here lemme hug you!
its okay not to be okay, if you want to cry, then crying
but dont forget to be happy after that :)

this is, as always, heartbreaking
jongin oh jongin, he is so lonely and the one who can cure him isnt beside him
the thing i hate the most is being lonely, and i completely understand his feelings
this is so good, i weep my tears
thank you, baby
pls be better!
asphodelblossoms #4
i want to scoop you up and give you hugs and buy you donuts and just basically make you happy, come heeeere (maybe i'll just leave virtual hugs so you won't run from me!)

but anyway, my two dongsaengs' stories are the ones keeping me sane at the moment even when you're writing so sadly my heart aches with my whole body. (how do i make you people happy >.<)
deerestkrrong #5
Chapter 1: "Kai was the stars and Jongin was the darkness."

"Kai doesn't really want Luhan to leave, he was willing to wait for him and recover, but what can he do?"

Why? How can you portray sadness this breaking?? I love kailu to death (even though they can't be) and i also love you for dedicating and writing this TT.TT

Please don’t feel sad anymore :(( things will clear out and nightmares would disappear eventually! Please don't forget how to smile :))

REALLY, THANK YOUU FOR THIS *LET ME SEND U A HUG AGAIN*
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