Chapter 1: They were never meant to be. Waaah. Your story breaks my heart. It's kinda sad because they are in different world, they cannot end up with each other. Nice story author-nim

Chapter 1: so i read this again~ and it still breaks my heart! T^T it's really beautiful and the plot is very well done <3
"they were never meant to be.." hurts as much this bittersweet feeling

it'll be wonderful if by chance they cross paths again and get past those words...

like perhaps youngjae has this new dealing and jaebum got involved somehow. then mark and jackson got over protective of their boss and jaebum wanted to be a part of youngjae's life again despite of their current situation. it'll be nice to see more of youngjae being the mafia boss and just thought that maybe they are really meant to be... T_T

what do you think?

Chapter 1: At first I assumed that Jaebum was the mafia guy and Youngjae was the singer until I got about half way through. Then I had to re-read the first half to understand everything. Despite my small confusion, I actually really like the fact that you switched the stereotypical roles

Chapter 1: Dear author-nim
I'm Vietnamese Ahgase, I 'm in love w/ ur writing n wanna share this to Ahgase in Vietnam.May I have ur permission to transalate this fic to Vietnamese ? I will try keep 80% the content of this fic coz I need to change some words to Vietnamese which cant explain the meaning as English does. Here is my page I'm working 4 : [https://www.facebook.com/2JaeCouple/?ref=aymt_homepage_panel] You can check it to make sure that I do it 4 non-profit. Thanks 4 reading n looking forward ur reply.

Chapter 1: This was great!! It made me feel this weird kind of nostalgia.
Good job ^-^

Chapter 1: OH MY GOD!!! This plot is EPIC!!!! #standingapplause..
I have to read 2 times for understand the whole story!!! Oh my god!!!
This is a great one shoot!! The angst ending is... WOW!!!

Chapter 1: Omg is this you nami?

Chapter 1: Well, it was a bit confusing but I'm guessing you wrote from different timelines, where the boys switched each other's places. And it was really sad to see they could never be together, as one of them had a really dangerous occupation. It breaks my heart to see they long for each other, knowing they could never have each other

Chapter 1: omg nami.... the plot line is so original and i kept waiting for a happy ending even though i knew it wouldn't happen... it's so good i love it so much. action, and romance. :") the only thing i got a little confused about was i thought the /he/ at the start was jaebum, and i didn't know which side the other characters were from, until the very end. but i love this so much omg!!!!