take a breath; dive in deep

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but, then, your eyes starts to wander;

because they weren't looking at me—

you weren't looking for me.

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TAKE A BREATH ; DIVE IN DEEP

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Oh Sehun | Jung Soojung | Kim Jongin | Choi Jinri

Park Sunyoung | Kim Myungsoo | Lee Jieun | Song Qian | Lee Taemin

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Foreword

bgm : haunting - halsey

title : take a breath; dive in deep

prompt : the song, actually. so, read the whole lyrics and hear the song.

category : angst, romance?, more angst!

words : 4k+

rating : pg-13

main characters : jung soojung. oh sehun. choi jinri. kim jongin.

secondary characters : kim myungsoo. song qian. lee jieun. park sunyoung. lee taemin.

note 1.1: i'm terribly bitter and mean and angsty, if you all must know. i guess this is the by-product of being antisocial and for months now. do review, though. i accept your complaints after you read the story. /smirks ala draco malfoy/

note 1.2 : i really despise having (to read, as well) my (or another author's) female protagonist have her super-duper oh-watch-me-cry-myself-to-sleep weak moments. so, this only means that goody-two shoes bore me to death. i like them dark and evil and sarcastic. /shoves chanel oberlin in the spotlight/

note 1.3 : meaning, in this story, i'll try to make my soojung... well, you go judge! paragraph-heavy, too.

warnings : one-sided love, certain bashing on one person (ha!), language, (physical/emotional) violence

APPRECIATION SPOT

REVIEWED BY: LUMIERE; ADVERTISEMENT AND REVIEW.

RESULT: 89/100 (click to see the review)

Do Not Plagiarize

read: don't even.

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niallophilic #1 Dec 16, 2015 23:35:36

Chapter 1: God, Halsey gives me life and having a story written (for Sestal, might I add) based on her song (ack, my fave is Haunting gfhdsg) is just perfect!

gossipman #2 Dec 7, 2015 21:30:42

Chapter 1: I didn't want to read this at first since I'm not in the mood for angst, I tried to take it lightly but it just hurttsss so much. Why is Sehun so stupid? What did Soojung ever do to him? Why is Sehun like that to her? Do they have a tragic history or what? Sehun is so insufferable here. But it seems that that's your agenda. Oh gosh, i'm just writhing in anger here hahahaah

fresxou- #3 Nov 7, 2015 21:15:05

Chapter 1: i'm a gigantic fan of ashley and for an author to use of her songs that also supports my ship (sestal and kaistal), it makes me so happy.
AND THIS FIC DIDN'T LET ME DOWN ONE BIT!
the angst is perfect. krystal's emotions and thoughts, the way she sees and watch sehun and sulli from afar, broke me apart.
i don't know why nobody's commenting but "hurray!" for me by being the first.